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Tragedy and Comedy

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I would beforehand ask for pardon if the narration is found dull or primitive by readers. All the below is a true occasion to which I was a witness and a little of my guess to bind actions into a whole picture. here it goes..
The Tragedy
I do not travel much or rather I do not travel. But this time I was sent with work task to a big city. They booked for me a room in a hotel near the local office. It was late evening of the second day of my stay when I saw a young lady and a young man sitting on a bench at the entrance to the hotel and talking and sipping red wine from wine glasses. I was smoking outside and marked for myself - that is unusual. Then I made a guess that the crowded bar is not a good place to talk privately and they are not so close yet to sit in his or her room. They should be staying separately I also thought. The couple did not resemble good acquaintances or lovers. By the manner they sit, gesture and look at each other they resembled people that had just met in person. She is a young lass of 19 or 20 years old, dark long chestnut hair, brown eyes. I would call her body beautiful - neither too slim not too fat, what must be curvy was curvy, what must be convex is convex and what must be concave is concave - just imagine a girl of 20 for yourself full of live and stepping into this big world.
He is a male of 25-27. Tall and strong, redhead, round face - a light and polished version of an american wrestler. While I stood there I felt an acute need to sit like this on a bench with my wife somewhere, chat and sip wine. The smoke break is over and I had returned to my room. The couple sat there for a quite a while and in the quiet evening through the open window I heard her exclamation: "You are too pushy". I marked to myself that I was somewhere right - they were setting limits for domination (normal or usual game of man and woman falling into relationship). I forgot about the couple in 5 minutes - complete strangers that are choosing their own way in life. I simply made up for myself their story.
In an hour and a half (about 11.30 pm) I heard voices of a male and female next door. No words can be recognised, just a murmur by young voices. And here I made Error 1 - I leaned to the wall trying to understand what they are talking about. I stopped doing this couple decades ago when I met my wife and joined nation of very happy creatures of lovers and then husbands. I did not recognise the voices. The couple next room was talking in a relaxed manner about something. The only thing I recognised was that she called him Max several times. I was about to continue with my things when suddenly I heard the sound of bodies sitting on the bed and light sound of hands fight. That sound cannot be mistaken - he was trying to hold her and kiss. That was done in silence first, then he uttered "Please let me, let me once please". Her answer was 'no', 'it's not my way, I can't', but not the "NO" no (resolute, short and frustrated). It was a tender no of a woman that instinctively hopes to be taken after fight or at least after some resistance before submit to the conqueror.
(I also was lucky to generate such 'no' from several lasses in my life and if I were a bit more persistent my life would go the different not always good way).
With his attempts going on her voice was quieter. Finally she uttered 'Let me have shower first please' and he let her stand from the bed. The shower sound was heard and in 5-10 minutes (time had stopped for me. I was all ears :) ) she cam back to bedroom.
While she was showering I thought for myself what would it be. That could be two strangers in hotel who just met each other or even sweeter - a virgin girl tricked into staying in one room with her hopeful lover. Just imagine what happened in my head. I also screamed in my mind - please let him!
When she came back there was a very short foreplay, usual sounds of bed-fight, murmurs and groans until he mounted her. Alas, she was not a virgin I marked for myself after some time with regret, but I forgot this regret in an instant because the couple played such a loud concert for midnight listeners that was heard all over the hotel for sure. I was about to go and have smoke outside. That was unbearable - I was aroused but my Ms. Jane that is happy to see me always is not next to me but 3 thousand miles away. When in 10 minutes they quieted obviously happy with each other I went out and had a long smoke. That night I spent leaning to the wall and trying to catch any single sound but in vain.
There is also a comedy part in this story as I stayed another 3 days. That part I will right a bit later below this post.
When I was leaving the hotel in 3 days I picked up my things and went to reception to pay bills. The room service called the reception and said that I left my laptop in the room. I hurried back and finally I saw who were the 2 sweet creatures next room - the couple I described above!!! they were exiting their room and at receptionist's he asked to keep their room for one more day.
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Cuteness.
The moans always bring me back to life.
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Do you have the audio ?
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kumkav wrote: 07 Jul 2023 12:02 Do you have the audio ?
And a time machine to access it! You bump a 9- year old post in the story section asking for audio? :roll:
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